I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Victoria and Jasmine This is Tiannah and Neha. We like the spooky background because it really matches with the words you wrote. The story you wrote was really scary because of the knife. We have a question where did you get the idea of a cemetery? Keep working hard.
Kia ora Jasmine and Victoria I love how you made a creating writing it looks super cool because the spooky and terrified background and the storm. the question I want to leave with you is how you had a great idea going to the cemetery? but keep working hard
Kia ora Victoria and Jasmine
ReplyDeleteThis is Tiannah and Neha. We like the spooky background because it really matches with the words you wrote. The story you wrote was really scary because of the knife. We have a question where did you get the idea of a cemetery? Keep working hard.
Kia ora Jasmine and Victoria
ReplyDeleteI love how you made a creating writing it looks super cool because the spooky and terrified background and the storm. the question I want to leave with you is how you had a great idea going to the cemetery? but keep working hard
Kia ora Jasmine and victoria, I really like your poem! And the colours you used.
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