I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Victoria, What an absolutely informational poster about sound. Just remember to proofread your writing Victoria- you have written some sound can cause people to be death- what you really want to be saying it some sounds can cause people to go deaf or be cause of death. Make sure all your information is backed up by evidence from texts. Always say where you got this information from. Keep up the awesome learning.
Kia ora Victoria,
ReplyDeleteWhat an absolutely informational poster about sound. Just remember to proofread your writing Victoria- you have written some sound can cause people to be death- what you really want to be saying it some sounds can cause people to go deaf or be cause of death. Make sure all your information is backed up by evidence from texts. Always say where you got this information from.
Keep up the awesome learning.
Hi Victoria
ReplyDeletegood job keep it up
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