I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thank you for sharing your evaluations of each character in the novel Victoria! I like how how you have given reasons to support each rating. Who was your favourite out of Dizzy, Benjamin and Evie?
Talofa lava Victoria,I really enjoyed reading your work and also I loved how you put pictures of the characters from the stories while rating them,I would also love if you make your name bigger so I can see it big and clearly,I also would like to ask you if you could put the date on your drawing and I loved how you layed out your work.
Kia ora Victoria. What lovely work! I love the bright colors you have used. It is very eye catching. I also love how you have added individual pictures for each characters. I just suggest you re read your mini paragraphs. In some places your sentences don't make sense. If you could be one character in descendants, who would you be?
Hello Victoria, This is Neha. Your opinions for the characters are good because you gave some information about the characters. Maybe next time you should use lighter colors.
Thank you for sharing your evaluations of each character in the novel Victoria! I like how how you have given reasons to support each rating. Who was your favourite out of Dizzy, Benjamin and Evie?
ReplyDeleteHello Victoria I like your rating and its so symmetrical and cool and its so eye catching and colourful keep blogging :)
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Victoria,I really enjoyed reading your work and also I loved how you put pictures of the characters from the stories while rating them,I would also love if you make your name bigger so I can see it big and clearly,I also would like to ask you if you could put the date on your drawing and I loved how you layed out your work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Victoria. What lovely work! I love the bright colors you have used. It is very eye catching. I also love how you have added individual pictures for each characters. I just suggest you re read your mini paragraphs. In some places your sentences don't make sense. If you could be one character in descendants, who would you be?
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kia ora Victoria I was very happy on how you layed your work out evenly and sized it all the same and it is very colourful and very beautiful;)
ReplyDeleteHello Victoria,
ReplyDeleteThis is Neha. Your opinions for the characters are good because you gave some information about the characters. Maybe next time you should use lighter colors.