I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Victoria, My name is Grace and I go to Paroa school. This would be very nice for all the families that are quite poor and are not as lucky as other people. This post is very thoughtful. To make it BTB (better that before) you could maybe add a picture or add some more words. From Grace
Kia ora Victoria, My name's Bella and I go to Paroa school. This is a heartfelt thoughtful post. I think I would pretty much agree and I think your family would be very happy and grateful for you. I think one way you could make it BTB (better than before) is by maybe putting in a few commas. See ya.
Hi Victoria, My name is Grace and I go to Paroa school. This would be very nice for all the families that are quite poor and are not as lucky as other people. This post is very thoughtful. To make it BTB (better that before) you could maybe add a picture or add some more words.
ReplyDeleteFrom Grace
Kia ora Victoria, My name's Bella and I go to Paroa school. This is a heartfelt thoughtful post. I think I would pretty much agree and I think your family would be very happy and grateful for you. I think one way you could make it BTB (better than before) is by maybe putting in a few commas.
ReplyDeleteSee ya.