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Wednesday, 28 November 2018

SLJ Paying it forward

If I could time travel I can give and show  my family my love chocolate clean water  and money to help them with there things in the 1930s.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Victoria, My name is Grace and I go to Paroa school. This would be very nice for all the families that are quite poor and are not as lucky as other people. This post is very thoughtful. To make it BTB (better that before) you could maybe add a picture or add some more words.
    From Grace

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  2. Kia ora Victoria, My name's Bella and I go to Paroa school. This is a heartfelt thoughtful post. I think I would pretty much agree and I think your family would be very happy and grateful for you. I think one way you could make it BTB (better than before) is by maybe putting in a few commas.
    See ya.

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