I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Talofa lava victoria and Mahara this is Viena from your class. your story on the candy dissapeard is really interesting and you said that after the popcorn was ready tommy had to go to bed because he is not an adult. keep up the good work.
Talofa lava victoria and Mahara this is Viena from your class.
ReplyDeleteyour story on the candy dissapeard is really interesting and you said that after the popcorn was ready tommy had to go to bed because he is not an adult. keep up the good work.
Kia ora Victoria and Mahara, this story was really creative, I love all the punctuation that is in this story. keep up the good work!
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