I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Victoria, it's Nese from your school I like how you have made a comment on your classmates blog and joining this years SLJ. My interest you can add is the picture of luisapeta's post. My question for you is how long did it take you to get more ideas of this comment?
Kia Ora Benjamine My name is Victroia from Edmund Hillary School, Thank you for your lovely comment and you are right maybe she would really like receiving feedbacks. About the form I filled it in and I put the URL of my comment . Thank you
Hi Victoria Well done for making a good start with the summer learning journey activities. When you comment on someone's blog post make sure you talk about exactly what they did well. For example what did you find interesting in Soloia's post on information about Big Ben. Thanks for making a great start in participating in the SLJ. Your learning will go up even more next year if you continue with SLJ.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Victoria, it's Nese from your school I like how you have made a comment on your classmates blog and joining this years SLJ. My interest you can add is the picture of luisapeta's post. My question for you is how long did it take you to get more ideas of this comment?
ReplyDeleteHello Nese Thank you for you comment it didn't take that long to write a comment I read the post and I just knew what to write.
DeleteKia Ora Victoria,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ben and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey.
Thanks for doing todays ‘your comments count’ activity. I’m sure that Luisapeta will enjoy receiving some feedback.
Do you think you posted a quality comment? It would be helpful to include some information about your blog post to go along with the screen shot.
And also, don’t forget to submit the link to your comment using this form to earn bonus points!
Ngā mihi
Benjamin
Summer Learning Journey
Kia Ora Benjamine
ReplyDeleteMy name is Victroia from Edmund Hillary School, Thank you for your lovely comment and you are right maybe she would really like receiving feedbacks. About the form I filled it in and I put the URL of my comment .
Thank you
Hi Victoria
ReplyDeleteWell done for making a good start with the summer learning journey activities. When you comment on someone's blog post make sure you talk about exactly what they did well. For example what did you find interesting in Soloia's post on information about Big Ben.
Thanks for making a great start in participating in the SLJ. Your learning will go up even more next year if you continue with SLJ.