I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Victoria, Well done what a great start to SLJ on the last day of school. Wow. Could you please write a desrciption about this picture and explain what it is and why you have chosen this picture. Thanks Victoria. Keep up the awesome sharing.
Hi Manpreet, Thank you for your nice comment I am really looking forward to the first day of school and yes your right maybe I should put a description. Thank you,
Great start with your first SLJ activity. Maybe next time you could add a description about the picture and some information about this picture as well. I think you did a great job starting your first SLJ for 2020 just remember to add some writing underneath the picture. Have you ever been to see the Big Ben building before? Have an amazing holiday.
Hi Victoria, Well done what a great start to SLJ on the last day of school. Wow. Could you please write a desrciption about this picture and explain what it is and why you have chosen this picture. Thanks Victoria. Keep up the awesome sharing.
ReplyDeleteHi Manpreet, Thank you for your nice comment I am really looking forward to the first day of school and yes your right maybe I should put a description.
ReplyDeleteThank you,
Kia Ora Victoria,
ReplyDeleteGreat start with your first SLJ activity. Maybe next time you could add a description about the picture and some information about this picture as well. I think you did a great job starting your first SLJ for 2020 just remember to add some writing underneath the picture. Have you ever been to see the Big Ben building before? Have an amazing holiday.
Thanks
Shriya