I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hola, Victoria this is your classmate Va'a and I really think that we should save the creatures that live down there and the only way we can save them, is by not trowing trash down there because if we keep throwing stuff that is not good down the ocean fishes might die and many other kinds of species that live down there, and I really did enjoy reading it but I think that you should put more writing in you "protect the ocean" poster and keep up the good work:D
Hi Victoria this Tina I really like your
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Hola, Victoria this is your classmate Va'a and I really think that we should save the creatures that live down there and the only way we can save them, is by not trowing trash down there because if we keep throwing stuff that is not good down the ocean fishes might die and many other kinds of species that live down there, and I really did enjoy reading it but I think that you should put more writing in you "protect the ocean" poster and keep up the good work:D
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