I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka pai, good work on your spooky book Victoria! I enjoyed how you used specific describing words like "nervously" and figurative language such as similes to help build the mood. If you found a creepy doll, what would you do?
Ka pai, good work on your spooky book Victoria! I enjoyed how you used specific describing words like "nervously" and figurative language such as similes to help build the mood. If you found a creepy doll, what would you do?
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